[#Draft1] Summary Article "Tapping Tech for Smoother Traffic"
Summary of "Tapping Tech for Smoother Traffic"
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In
the article “Tapping Tech for Smoother Traffic”, Tay (2018) emphasizes on the
use of smart technology to improve the traffic system in Singapore over the
years. Since Singapore’s independence, its main challenge is to accommodate to
the increasing population with limited amount of space available. Tay claimed
that the current system, 1975 Area Licensing Scheme (ALS) requires intensive
manual labor which can be physically exhausting. The case study mentioned that
Land Transport Authority (LTA) has approached the issue by introducing an
automated system called Intelligent Transport System (ITS). This helps in controlling
the traffic system and maximize road networks to ease users’ road journey. Tay
concluded that Singapore is striving to become a more liveable city and provide
better quality living by enhancing road journey for its citizens.
As traffic in Singapore is getting complicated, advancement in technology plays
an important role in ensuring smooth traffic for everyone.
Source: Tay Q.W, July 2018. Tapping Tech for Smoother Traffic. Retrieved from: https://www.clc.gov.sg/docs/default-source/urban-solutions/urb-sol-iss-13-pdfs/11_case_study-singapore-intelligent-transport-systems.pdf
Word count: 148 words
-Updated on: 27/09/2019
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ReplyDeleteHi Tiara, the summary outline was elaborated clearly however there are a few points that my team would like to highlight.
ReplyDelete1) Citation presented were clear. (Sophisticated)
2) Key points are paraphrased clearly. (Sophisticated)
3) Firstly, we feel that the main point doesn’t consist of supporting the first statement. It directly explain about the problems. (Developing)
4) Secondly, you specifically mentioned one example of the development for transport system [This shows that the summary only mentioned 1 of the problem yet it is not the only solution to the problem] (Developing)
5) Sentence structure
-> "Therefore, Tay mentioned that the government has approached the issue by introducing an automated system called Intelligent Transport System (ITS) – used control traffic system using technology and maximize road networks to ease users’ road journey." [Should try to simplify the sentence as it is quite lengthy] (Competent)
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